How Eldo Got His Groove Back

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Re: How Eldo Got His Groove Back

Post by Orwell on Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:46 pm

Dialogue is everything, as stories have characters, and we learn something of character by hearing them speak for themselves. Very Happy That's my opinion, and I'm right! Nod

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Re: How Eldo Got His Groove Back

Post by Norc on Sun Aug 19, 2012 4:10 pm

Have read the story. It was truly great! (and don't worry about the dialog, you're doing just fine ^^).

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Re: How Eldo Got His Groove Back

Post by Eldorion on Sun Aug 19, 2012 4:11 pm

Thanks, Norc! I really appreciate that. Very Happy

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Re: How Eldo Got His Groove Back

Post by Ally on Sun Aug 19, 2012 6:21 pm

Eldorion

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Re: How Eldo Got His Groove Back

Post by Eldorion on Sun Aug 19, 2012 6:27 pm

Ally?

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Re: How Eldo Got His Groove Back

Post by Amarië on Sun Aug 19, 2012 7:11 pm

Now THAT is dialogue! Nod

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Re: How Eldo Got His Groove Back

Post by Elthir on Sun Aug 19, 2012 8:42 pm

Amarie

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Re: How Eldo Got His Groove Back

Post by Amarië on Mon Aug 20, 2012 7:36 am

Did you just call me Amary, Loremaster? Shocked
Though I guess that is what the Shire Hobbits call me, so I suppose it is a bit of a grey area. Shrugging

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Re: How Eldo Got His Groove Back

Post by Norc on Mon Aug 20, 2012 8:24 pm

Norc.

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